at 03/06/10 1:56AM

Proofreaders! This is my rough draft for my next article in the Beaverton Valley Times due Thursday. If you see lots that can be improved feel free to copy/paste it to send back to me in an email with edits (or leave your ideas for improvement in the comments below is also fine). In addition to grammar improvements, I also need to know stuff like: Too flowery/female? Too wordy at some point? Too choppy in content? Confusing anywhere? A better/clearer way to state something? Too casual? Better examples for application? Better Title? Thanks for helping!
Every Friday my husband returns to his hometown to meditatively wander in solitude a cherished piece of property in the wooded, rolling hills on the outskirts of Silverton— land owned by generations of his people. This quiet ritual refreshes him mentally and renews him emotionally. In the spring he'll come home waxing poetic about the smell of the good earth awakening as it comes back to life, the emerging wildlife, and the first baby sprouts of grass seed that will mature to be harvested come summer.
Just as all this green began sprouting, the songs of birds in the morning or little frogs at night commenced, and the warmth of a sunny day here and there warmed our faces, this gem showed up in a deep study our congregation was having from the book of Ezekiel: "Cast away from you all your transgressions which you have committed and make yourselves a new heart and a new spirit! ...declares the Lord GOD... repent and live.
Then it hit me. Having eagerly read God's word through cover to cover most years of my adult life, I realized, this "repent and live" is nothing less than the summary of the other 807,358 words contained in scripture! God wants to give us the same refreshing and renewal He gives the earth every spring— spiritual "times of refreshing" that come only "from the presence of the Lord" (Acts 3:19).
"A new heart". "A new spirit". New as the freshness of March. How again, Lord? By "casting away", by discarding the old, destructive ways of thinking and behaving. Turns out the proverbial creepy guy on the corner wearing the tent sign "Repent!" that I've always walked a wide circle to avoid, was, well, right. Of course he was right. How many times had I seen it played out in lives all around me. You've seen it too. The husband who trades in his roving eye for loyalty to his wife and gains a deep intimate relationship. The addict who trades alcohol or drug of choice for sobriety and gains back his life. The teenager who takes a sharp corner from knuckle dragging indolence to resolute industry and eventually gains financial security. Mr. Materialistic who has a light bulb moment and trades in 20 hours of weekly overtime for more moments enjoying his wife and children.
Elizabeth George put it this way: "When I take the time to draw near to God today, I will make The Great Exchange. I will exchange my weariness for His strength, my weakness for His power, my darkness for His light, my problems for His solutions, my burdens for His freedom, my frustrations for His peace, my turmoil for His calm, my hopes for His promises, my afflictions for His balm of comfort, my confusion for His knowledge, my doubt for His assurance, my nothingness for His awareness, the temporal for the eternal, the impossible for the possible."
Perhaps seasons were created as an object lesson to teach us this very message: When all looks lost, God can create life yet again. Jesus said, "I came that they may have life, and have it abundantly" (John 10:10). Choose abundance.